doc: simplify Collaborator pre-nomination text

Split one very long sentence into three shorter sentences.

PR-URL: https://github.com/nodejs/node/pull/27348
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Jeremiah Senkpiel <fishrock123@rocketmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Colin Ihrig <cjihrig@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Ruben Bridgewater <ruben@bridgewater.de>
Reviewed-By: Anatoli Papirovski <apapirovski@mac.com>
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Rich Trott 2019-04-22 12:20:03 -07:00 committed by Daniel Bevenius
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@ -139,12 +139,10 @@ the nomination.
The nomination passes if no Collaborators oppose it after one week. Otherwise, The nomination passes if no Collaborators oppose it after one week. Otherwise,
the nomination fails. the nomination fails.
Prior to the public nomination, the Collaborator initiating it can seek There are steps a nominator can take in advance to make a nomination as
feedback from other Collaborators in private using frictionless as possible. Use the [Collaborators discussion page][] to request
[the GitHub discussion page][collaborators-discussions] of the feedback from other Collaborators in private. A nominator may also work with the
Collaborators team, and work with the nominee to improve the nominee's nominee to improve their contribution profile.
contribution profile, in order to make the nomination as frictionless
as possible.
If individuals making valuable contributions do not believe they have been If individuals making valuable contributions do not believe they have been
considered for a nomination, they may log an issue or contact a Collaborator considered for a nomination, they may log an issue or contact a Collaborator
@ -162,7 +160,7 @@ completed within a month after the nomination is accepted.
The TSC follows a [Consensus Seeking][] decision-making model as described by The TSC follows a [Consensus Seeking][] decision-making model as described by
the [TSC Charter][]. the [TSC Charter][].
[collaborators-discussions]: https://github.com/orgs/nodejs/teams/collaborators/discussions [Collaborators discussion page]: https://github.com/orgs/nodejs/teams/collaborators/discussions
[Consensus Seeking]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consensus-seeking_decision-making [Consensus Seeking]: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Consensus-seeking_decision-making
[TSC Charter]: https://github.com/nodejs/TSC/blob/master/TSC-Charter.md [TSC Charter]: https://github.com/nodejs/TSC/blob/master/TSC-Charter.md
[nodejs/node]: https://github.com/nodejs/node [nodejs/node]: https://github.com/nodejs/node